Friday, January 9, 2009

My Essay Thing ....

42Th Street in New York by Bart De Bruyn.

The Brightness of the lights , all most blinded me , as I got out of the small , cramped taxi . You couldn't even see the stars , in the dark, black sky . So many buildings towered over me like giants starring down at me .
As I was searching for a place to eat , I smelled all of the food , which made me hungrier then I was before . The busy people almost knocked me over , trying to get to the shops and the restaurants . The sounds of cars beeping and people chattering , filled my ears. Finally , I got into a restaurant , out of the busy city , and finally got to eat .

~Meghan

3 comments:

Anna said...

I really liked this Meghan! I think you did a great job! You described it really well. I could feel like I was actually in New York City!

Meghan said...

Wow ! Really ? Thanks !

Glennellen said...

Excellent, Meghan! You and I both did essays on New York, and I really, really like your description of your picture. Great job!