Here is Glennellen's descriptive essay:
You can tell just by looking at her face that she is curious about whatever she is observing. Beauty shines out of her, as well as kindness and sincerity. The way she stands, her fingers curled around the hood of her cloak and bending to get a closer look at something, shows great significance. There are so many details that are shown from her main features...
EYES: Interest and Curiosity
BROW: Tranquillity
HAIR: Grace and Delicateness
SMILE: Gentleness
FACE: True Beauty
She does not appear all done up, but clean and fresh. Like she is expressing her true beauty that God gave her. The jewel on her forehead can make us wonder, and yet at the same time, look in awe at how simple and yet so elegant it looks. She gives us a pure appearance...and you can tell that she would be gentle with whatever she touches or looks upon. You can see in her eyes that she is interested and pays close attention to whatever it may be that she is focused on, and her smile can also express that she is laid back and has no worries. Her brow not only shows tranquillity, but a sign of trust. Like you know that she has full understanding.
Great patience also flows over her, like she's not in a rush and feels free and that there is no hurry. She appears to be a soft-spoken girl, not someone who is loud and is easily angered.
This is what I see in this pure, beautiful girl's appearance. I do not know if any of you see the same, but I know that that is what I see in her. Feel free to tell me what you think of what I wrote and you can tell me what YOU also see, if you wish.
9 comments:
Very well done! I especially like the first paragraph~very eloquently written. I think you read her emotions well. Good job!
Wow Glenn !!!
That's AWESOME !!!
Thank you both so much!! I really love the picture...and I saw SO many details in her face and main features. I just had to write down everything that I could see her expressing...how she smiles and what you see in it, how she sets her eyes upon something, and the other things as well. All in all, I am so happy that I chose this picture. I hope to hear more responses to this!! :)
you and anna have REALLY LOOOOONG descriptions. mines really short and not as good as you guys' ones. but i'm not putting it on here, cause it's 'special' and secret.
but anyway...awesome job with this!!!
Hahaha!! Thanks, Matthew! I really do get very deep in detail in these kinds of things. It's just too hard for me not to! I really love these kinds of assignments and take full advantage of them. I'm sure that yours is great, as well.
Same with me, Glenn. I can't forget to put one tiny detail in. If i forget... well.... idk what happens but, oh well. You did an awesome job! I love it!
Me too, Anna. I have to make sure that I put in everything that I want in there. If not, then I either redo it (if I can) or...well, I don't know. Hahaha!! But I make sure that I can fit everything that I want to say in it! I am soooooo happy that you like it!!!
Yeah it was great!
Thanks so much, I hope that we can do another assignment like this again soon!
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