~ Happy Lady ~This woman seems to enjoy her life and all those who surround her. Her smooth unlined face portrays she is a carefree spirit who hardly ever worries. Her nonchalant attitude shows that she is at peace with the world and most likely her fears. She wears an unusual coconut hat, revealing she isn't afraid to act silly; and she is comfortable being herself. Her cheeks show her strength and how she uses it. The strength in her cheeks signal to all around not to mess with her. Her eyes are like brownies fresh out of the oven, dark-brown, warm, sparkling with happiness. The spring-glow of her radiant face gives her the look of someone who is tranquil. The lady's enormous smile gives all who are down, a warm feeling on the inside.
4 comments:
That is really great, Ari! I thought you did an excellent job at being so descriptive and detailed. You really did a wonderful job at describing her. My friend even read it with me, and she said that her favorite part was when you described the eyes. She loved it just as much as I did. Awesome work!!!
Hi Ari, I really like this description too! I also liked the description of the eyes and the closing sentence, it wrapped the description up well. Very well done!
Great job Ari! I loved it!
Thats AWESOME ARI !!!
I like the part were you say she is wearing the coconut Hat , And the she isn't afraid to be silly , and shes comfortable being herself. I also liked the part about the eyes , Her eyes are like brownies fresh out of the oven ... you did a great job with that ... you also are making me hungry for brownies !!!
You did a great job !!!
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